tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-568294794858694375.post8050171816114321349..comments2023-05-26T20:58:12.462+12:00Comments on Cruz: The Things That I Liked Mostly At campPES Blog Archivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03346754417165409248noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-568294794858694375.post-43621260469078398462012-03-23T09:53:06.700+13:002012-03-23T09:53:06.700+13:00Hi Cruz
Great piece of writing I like all the des...Hi Cruz<br /><br />Great piece of writing I like all the descriptive words you have used.Tupachttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02796923782418840313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-568294794858694375.post-11846605498534246092012-03-20T09:30:53.272+13:002012-03-20T09:30:53.272+13:00Kiorana Cruz,
I like the way you said "We got...Kiorana Cruz,<br />I like the way you said "We got our bags then left with our family back home the end" but i'm not correcting you but you need the end capital t and e. You also need a full stop after home. but any ways i think your writing has increased a lot so keep up the good work and writing.HaveaPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05818590947194145424noreply@blogger.com