Friday, July 20, 2012

Precious McKenzie - Weight Lifter

The weightlifters face, hard like a stone looked as if he was about to punch anyone that came in his way, bar to his chest and about to do the final lift.The crowd had gone wild as soon as the weightlifter, Precious McKenzie gripped the bar and with a grunt he pushed all his weight into the air. Now that was success!


Thanks To This Site For The Photo:
http://www.chidlovski.net/liftup/images/i_athletes/b1549.jpg
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2 comments:

  1. VivienneJuly 30, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    Hello Cruz,
    Great writing. I really like this paragraph because you used interesting vocab as well as different beginnings. You are right his face was so determined to lift that bar. Anyway, I can't wait to read more post. Keep up the awesome work!!!

    Vivienne

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  2. PirinihaJuly 31, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    Hey Cruz

    That was interesting about Precious McKenzie. You should be a teacher about Olympics.

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