Wednesday, April 4, 2012

My Picnic Reflection

Things that I think that I should have worked on for my picnic reflection was using better vocabulary. After that i could have used better words and stop the repetition that wasn’t very necessary. More to that I didn’t think that there was anything that i really had to work on. The End
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  1. Matthew RApril 30, 2012 at 9:05 AM

    Hey Cruz,

    I think you can work on a little punctuation, as I saw a few un-capital I's in the work above.

    Matthew R

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