Friday, September 30, 2011

The day I saw an Alien

As you know everyday brings a new adventure and a new adventure brings new friends from everywhere.

Well as I can remember I was resting in bed with a broken ankle and it was pouring down with rain and hail. I can also remember seeing a a square in the middle was a beaming light and in each corner was a red light. So as I rested in bed looking out the window I saw this square UFO flying around the sky like a plane then all of a sudden bang they where in my room.

As they approached me with there laser guns and all I layed there in my bed about to wet myself when one came from behind all of them and started talking to me "Hello fellow human of the planet earth i am King Narnode and I have come from mars to tell you about the plan when my evil twin brother is going to blow up EARTH"

So as I sat there in shock about to reply then before I could do anything I passed out........ Hours later I awoke to a beautiful sky and as i sat up I noticed that my leg had magically healed so fast and that I felt like doing a back flip out of my window then I remembered about what that funky alien told me "Pfffft that was just a dream and its just repeating it in my head like a broken record"

So as I left my room I started to notice that I wasn't in my house anymore and that I was in a a different dimension but in a different house as well "Hello King Narnode" I shouted in panic "Down here" he replied "O.K" I replied in relief so as I marched down stairs he had A feast prepared for me. "Thank you" I said as he settled me in "Guards" he called loudly then as I heard the stomping feet of the guard that sounded more like an elephant a gnome in a armour with a sword with the power of a dragon inside came out "Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha" I laughed as he marched then with a loud roar A dragon crashed into the side of castle " There the beast maybe now prepare beast for your suffering I am the mighty Gonthor" He announced as he approached the dragon and with a almighty slash he slayed the dragon with the swift of his sword.

"Thank you" said King Narnode as the knight left the room. I seen his evil brother and him talking and as I seen him laugh they where both on the same side so as I gathered all of the knights and then we planned to out smart them and to leave but as we leave someone had to set up the bomb and destroy the evil twins together and to never return.

So we talked and we planned then suddenly we all had the same Idea we will lure them both into a room where the bomb is planted then we will leave and say goodbye to them forever.
So as I planted the bomb and lured King Narnode in the others bought the so called evil twin and we ran from them. Bad was they where only decoys and the real ones had already escaped luckily for me I had a bomb already set up in every part of the dimension thanks to my little buddy Jeremy the Spider

So we all left the world using a portal that was half way around the world as we walked we heard a loud explosion getting closer and closer then we sprinted the portal was atleast a mile away and to make things worse there where the evil twins King Narnode was there but ripped off his mask and turned out to be Drufix and the other e twin turned out to be Zuthix they where killers as they shot beams at us we dodged them we dived we jumped and we made it to the portal. "Wheew" I said then as I didn't notice Zuthix and Drufix where there and out of the blues came Gonthor as he fought with the twins he fought vulnerably and came out victorious I jumpde through and I said goodbye and I ended up home to where I belong.

As I looked in the sky I saw The Gnome Guards who helped me and I feel to sleep awoken yet by another King "Not again" I groaned


  1. HI Cruz
    I really enjoyed reading your writing and it was very fun and always exciting to read because there were no boring bits.
    Good writing Cruz

    Keep up the amazing work!!!

  2. Hi Cruz.....
    WOW what a piece of writing that you produced!!!!! HONESTLY!!!!! Reading this you really put me in your shoes. Just like our school korero, "PUT YOURSELF IN THEIR SHOES"
    Keep up the good work
    from Kayde.
    The End


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